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Monday, September 30, 2019
Little Big Crimes Review: OBF, Inc, by Bernice L. McFadden
Little Big Crimes: OBF, Inc, by Bernice L. McFadden: "OBF, Inc," by Bernice L. McFadden, in Cutting Edge, edited by Joyce Carol Oates, Akashic Press, 2019. The publisher sent me...
Sunday, September 29, 2019
A Short Walk Down A Dark Street: Issue 72
As posted by Peter
DiChellis to our SMFS list….
This
week’s blog dishes the straight dope with links to a devilish dose of reviews,
releases, free reads, and more.
Includes:
Compare notes as four reviewers converge on Tough 2: Crime Stories and Mystery
Weekly magazine.
Plus:
Encore! EQMM Editor Janet Hutchings discusses a recent
submission trend, a type of mystery she often doesn't like, 1st vs. 3rd POV,
and her view on story endings.
A short
walk down a dark street (#72). Celebrating short mystery and crime fiction.
Best
wishes,
Peter
SleuthSayers: KDP Paperback Decisions by R. T. Lawton
SleuthSayers: KDP Paperback Decisions: by R.T. Lawton Warning. Today's offering may give you a headache. It covers number of pages, font and font size, cost of printing, cos...
Saturday, September 28, 2019
SMFS Member Publishing News: Joan Leotta
SMFS list member Joan
Leotta’s short story, An
Ancient Recipe: Mystery Short Story,
appears today in the latest issue of Kings River Life Magazine. You can read it
here.
SMFS Short Story Saturdays: Jacqueline Seewald
Each Saturday, we feature a SMFS list member whose work can
be read online for free. These short stories are at least a year old.
For SMFS Short Story
Saturdays today, Jacqueline Seewald shares the 2014 published short story, “Murder
and Money” archived at Over My Dead Body!
If you would like to be included and are a member of the SMFS
list at yahoo groups, email the link to your story to KevinRTipple at Verizon
dot net. If you are not a member, this would be a good time to check us out at Yahoo Groups.
Friday, September 27, 2019
SleuthSayers Blog: A little about Private Eyes by O'Neil De Noux
SleuthSayers: A little about Private Eyes: by O'Neil De Noux We all know there is no one-way to write, no one type of private eye, no rules – except to write clearly. In ...
Thursday, September 26, 2019
SMFS Member Publication News: Toni Kelner
SMFS list
member Toni L. P. Kelner, writing as Leigh Perry, sends word today that her
book, The Skeleton Stuffs a Stocking: A Family Skeleton Mystery,
was released Tuesday, September 24rth. Published by Diversion Books,
the read is available in paperback and digital formats from Amazon,
the publisher, and
other vendors.
Synopsis:
Sid is back with a murder that’s sure to send a chill down your spine in Leigh Perry’s sixth Family Skeleton mystery.
Dr. Georgia Thackery is back at home with her parents after finding a new adjunct position at Bostock College. Everyone is excited for their first family Christmas with nothing to hide. Why? Because Georgia’s daughter Madison is now in the know about Sid, their walking, talking family skeleton.
But their Christmas cheer is interrupted when the Thackerys' dog Byron goes missing on a cold December night. When he’s finally found, he has a femur between his jaws, and Georgia and Madison race to apologize to Sid for letting the dog gnaw on him yet again.
Except that all of Sid’s bones are present and accounted for.
This bone is from somebody else, and when they trace Byron’s trail to an overgrown lot nearby, they find the rest of the skeleton. It’s the normal kind, not moving or telling jokes, and when the police come to take charge, they’re sure it was murder.
And one of Georgia’s adjunct friends could be implicated.
With tensions stirring at the college and everyone hiding a secret or two, Sid and Georgia must uncover the truth before the ghost of a Christmas past strikes again.
SMFS Member Publishing News: Debra Goldstein
SMFS list member Debra Goldstein sends word that her book, Two Bites Too Many: A Sarah Blair Mystery, was released Tuesday, September
24rth. Published by Kensington Books, the
read is available in mass market paperback, audio and digital formats from Amazon,
the publisher,
and other vendors.
Synopsis:
Far from a
domestic goddess, Sarah Blair would rather catch bad guys than slave over a hot
stove. But when a dangerous murder boils over in Wheaton, Alabama, catching the
killer means leaving her comfort zone …
Things are finally looking up for Sarah Blair following her unsavory divorce. Settled into a cozy carriage house with her sassy Siamese cat, RahRah, she has somehow managed to hang on to her modest law firm receptionist job and—if befriending flea-bitten strays at the local animal shelter counts—lead a thriving social life. For once, Sarah almost has it together more than her enterprising twin, Emily, a professional chef whose efforts to open a gourmet restaurant have hit a real dead end …
When the president of the town bank and city council is murdered after icing Emily’s business plans, all eyes are on the one person who left the scene with blood on her hands—the Blair girls’ sharp-tongued mother, Maybelle. Determined to get her mom off the hook ASAP, Sarah must collect the ingredients of a deadly crime to bring the true culprit to justice. But as neighbors turn against her family, can she pare down the suspects before another victim lands on the chopping block?
Includes quick and easy recipes!
Things are finally looking up for Sarah Blair following her unsavory divorce. Settled into a cozy carriage house with her sassy Siamese cat, RahRah, she has somehow managed to hang on to her modest law firm receptionist job and—if befriending flea-bitten strays at the local animal shelter counts—lead a thriving social life. For once, Sarah almost has it together more than her enterprising twin, Emily, a professional chef whose efforts to open a gourmet restaurant have hit a real dead end …
When the president of the town bank and city council is murdered after icing Emily’s business plans, all eyes are on the one person who left the scene with blood on her hands—the Blair girls’ sharp-tongued mother, Maybelle. Determined to get her mom off the hook ASAP, Sarah must collect the ingredients of a deadly crime to bring the true culprit to justice. But as neighbors turn against her family, can she pare down the suspects before another victim lands on the chopping block?
Includes quick and easy recipes!
Wednesday, September 25, 2019
SMFS Member Publication News: John M. Floyd
SMFS list member John M. Floyd has another
mystery short story appearing in the Woman’s World Magazine. His latest mystery
short story, “Suzie’s Special Clues” is in the current issue (September 30, 2019)
of Woman’s World
Magazine. The publication is available on some newsstands
and by subscription.
Members are reminded that Mr. Floyd
shared in his piece at SleuthSayers
Blog how he goes about writing short stories for this
market. Well worth reading, especially if you are looking to break into this
market.
Little Big Crimes Review: Pentecost by Eve Fisher
Little Big Crimes: Pentecost, by Eve Fisher: "Pentecost," by Eve Fisher, in Me Too Stories, edited by Elizabeth Zelvin, Level Best Books, 2019. This is the second appear...
Tuesday, September 24, 2019
SMFS Member Publishing News: Edith Maxwell
Today is publication day for SMFS list member Edith
Maxwell’s new novella, Christmas Cocoa and a Corpse appearing
in the three novella collection, Christmas Cocoa Murder. Writing as
Maddie Day, the read is published by Kensington
Books. The book is available in print, audio, and digital formats, from Amazon
and other vendors. Edith Maxwell’s novella
is part of her well established Country Store Mysteries Series.
Synopsis:
'Tis the
season for hot chocolate and mouthwatering treats. But sometimes too much of a
good thing can be downright deadly . . .
CHRISTMAS COCOA MURDER by CARLENE O’CONNOR
Siobhán O’Sullivan’s hopes for a quiet Irish Christmas are dashed when the local Santa turns up dead in a carnival dunk tank of hot cocoa. Now instead of hunting down holiday gifts, she’s pursuing a heartless killer. Seems the dead Santa was no angel either, stealing neighborhood dogs to guide his sleigh. But was it his holiday antics—or worse—that led to his death by chocolate?
CHRISTMAS COCOA AND A CORPSE by MADDIE DAY
When local businessman Jed Greenberg is found dead with a Chocolate lab whimpering over his body, the police start sniffing around Robbie Jordan’s country restaurant for answers. Was it something in Robbie’s hot cocoa that killed Jed, or was it Cocoa the dog? As the suspects pile as high as her holiday tree, Robbie attempts to get to the bottom of the sickly-sweet murder . . .
DEATH BY HOT COCOA by Alex Erickson
A Christmas-themed escape game seems like the perfect pre-holiday treat for bookstore café owner Krissy Hancock and her best friend. But when the host is found dead in a pool of hot cocoa, it’s up to Krissy and her team to catch the killer—or escape before getting killed.
There’s nothing like a hot cup of murder to warm up the holiday season!
CHRISTMAS COCOA MURDER by CARLENE O’CONNOR
Siobhán O’Sullivan’s hopes for a quiet Irish Christmas are dashed when the local Santa turns up dead in a carnival dunk tank of hot cocoa. Now instead of hunting down holiday gifts, she’s pursuing a heartless killer. Seems the dead Santa was no angel either, stealing neighborhood dogs to guide his sleigh. But was it his holiday antics—or worse—that led to his death by chocolate?
CHRISTMAS COCOA AND A CORPSE by MADDIE DAY
When local businessman Jed Greenberg is found dead with a Chocolate lab whimpering over his body, the police start sniffing around Robbie Jordan’s country restaurant for answers. Was it something in Robbie’s hot cocoa that killed Jed, or was it Cocoa the dog? As the suspects pile as high as her holiday tree, Robbie attempts to get to the bottom of the sickly-sweet murder . . .
DEATH BY HOT COCOA by Alex Erickson
A Christmas-themed escape game seems like the perfect pre-holiday treat for bookstore café owner Krissy Hancock and her best friend. But when the host is found dead in a pool of hot cocoa, it’s up to Krissy and her team to catch the killer—or escape before getting killed.
There’s nothing like a hot cup of murder to warm up the holiday season!
Monday, September 23, 2019
SMFS Member Publication News: Barry Ergang
SMFS list member Barry Ergang’s poem, “Paradise
Costs” is published online today at The 5-2. The piece appears at the long running site
operated by SMFS list member and former officer, Gerald So.
Guest Post: How A Novelist Writes Short Crime Fiction by Elizabeth Zelvin
Please
welcome back Elizabeth Zelvin to our SMFS Blog. Among other things, Elizabeth Zelvin is the editor for the Me Too Short Stories: An Anthology recently published by Level Best Books.
How A Novelist Writes Short Crime Fiction
Elizabeth Zelvin
I hope it goes without saying that every writer
writes in the way that suits, er, them,
as we say in the 21st century, best. But here are a few tips on craft from this writer, who writes two series that include
both novels and short crime fiction as well as standalone short stories.
My Bruce Kohler series is a straightforward
mystery series. In every case, an amateur sleuth and his two sidekicks address
the familiar pattern of crime, investigation, and solution. A novel is too long
to proceed in a straight line. Once the investigation starts, complexity must
be added: revelations about the victim, unexpected witness and suspects,
subplots that may involve the protagonist's personal life rather than the
murder. Another murder may lead to further plot twists.
A story of 3,000 to 5,000 words can be more
streamlined. I've never found such a space too cramped to set a scene, develop
character, and deliver scenes of witty dialogue and emotional intensity. But
the plot doesn't have to be extended to sustain the reader's attention, so
complications aren't needed. As long as the writing is tight and the pace
brisk, one crime, one investigation, and one solution are enough in a
traditional detective story.
I use the Rule of Three in many of my short
stories. I did it by instinct first and named it afterwards, when I realized it
worked from story to story and in a variety of forms. The first time, my
protagonist Bruce makes the mistake of letting a charming but feckless
Australian sleep on his sofa. The Australian brings a different woman home with
him every night until the morning Bruce finds him dead on the sofa. The women
who participated in the victim's one-night stands are obvious suspects. But how
many? And how about clues? I had Bruce find small items the Australian left in
the pockets of a sweatshirt—Bruce’s sweatshirt.
One, two, three. Three clues, three suspects to
investigate. Just right, like the porridge in Baby Bear's bowl, his chair, and
the bed where the three bears found Goldilocks sleeping. In fact—and I say this
with pure hindsight—look at fairytales and folk tales, and we see that three
has always been the magic number, the number that makes a story work.
In a standalone story I wrote a few years later, I
used the Rule of Three in a different way. I set myself the challenging task of
blending several disparate elements. The setting is Queens, the second least
interesting borough of New York City. It’s a story of domestic violence and
betrayal. It’s the coming of age story of the protagonist, a twelve-year-old
boy. And the backdrop is a true story that has always haunted me, the execution
of the Rosenbergs, leaving their children—New York Jewish kids my age—orphans.
In the first draft of my story, the protagonist is
approached by a mysterious man whom most readers will identify as an FBI agent.
The man asks questions about the boy's parents' political activities, and the
boy responds because he is angry at his father. When I reread the draft, I
realized it lacked tension. So I applied the Rule of Three. In the revised
version, the agent approaches the boy three times. I made sure the second
encounter had more emotional impact than the first. And the third time, after a
violent scene at home, the boy succumbs.
In detective fiction, one advantage of short
stories over novels is that not every procedural detail must be included. The
writer can leave out what Elmore Leonard called "the parts that readers
tend to skip." You don't have to study maps of the town where you set your
scene or email your cop friends to be sure you've used the right caliber
ammunition in the handgun found near the body. You can even get away with not
explaining how the investigators get from the moment of revelation to the
arrest. In my first Bruce story, Bruce's Proustian moment is the smell of
garlic—and in the next sentence, the cops are knocking on the killer's door.
In a novel, I'd have had to write a believable
scene in which Bruce convinces the police his reasoning is correct and gives
them probable cause to search the suspect's apartment. In a short story, it
doesn't matter, as long as you end with a bang. The bang can be supplied by
either the hallowed "twist at the end" that everyone knows a short
story requires or, just as good, in my opinion, a cracking good punch line. In
a twist, the action or deduction takes a clever turn. In a punch line, either
the narrative or a character delivers a zinger. This may be done with language,
or twist and punch line may be combined in the sudden revelation of some new
aspect of character. The example that comes to mind is the end of the movie Some Like It Hot: "I'm a man!"
"Well, nobody's perfect." The only real criterion is that it leaves
the reader gasping.
Elizabeth Zelvin ©2019
Elizabeth
Zelvin is the author of the Bruce Kohler Mysteries and the Mendoza Family
Saga. Her short stories have been nominated three times each for the Derringer
and Agatha awards and have appeared in Ellery
Queen's Mystery Magazine and Alfred
Hitchcock's Mystery Magazine, among others. She has edited two anthologies:
Me
Too Short Stories: An Anthology and Where Crime Never Sleeps: Murder
New York Style 4. Visit her author website at http://elizabethzelvin.com.
Sunday, September 22, 2019
A Short Walk Down A Dark Street: Issue 71
As posted by
SMFS list member Peter DiChellis….
This week’s blog piles it on with links to an awesome
stack of reviews, releases, free reads, and more.
Includes: Free stories from Akashic Books
anthologies Kansas City Noir, Mumbai Noir, and The
Speed Chronicles.
Plus: Excerpts from the upcoming issue of Occult
Detective Quarterly. And a Bill Pronzini review of Anthony Boucher’s best
mystery stories.
A short walk down a dark street (#71).
Celebrating short mystery and crime fiction.
Best wishes,
Peter
Saturday, September 21, 2019
SMFS Short Story Saturdays: Lisa de Nikolits
Each Saturday, we feature a SMFS list member whose work can
be read online for free. These short stories are at least a year old.
For
SMFS Short Story Saturdays today, list member Lisa de Nikolits shares her November
2017 published short story, “Burning Bridges” archived at Open
Book.
If you would like
to be included and are a member of the SMFS list at yahoo groups, email the
link to your story to KevinRTipple at Verizon dot net. If you are not a member,
this would be a good time to check us out at Yahoo
Groups.
Wednesday, September 18, 2019
Tuesday, September 17, 2019
SleuthSayers: Pithy and Thought-Provoking...or Not by Michael Bracken
SleuthSayers: Pithy and Thought-Provoking...or Not: by Michael Bracken I’ve been so busy the past month that I’ve not had time to draft something pithy and thought-provoking. In August, I ...
Monday, September 16, 2019
Little Big Crimes Review: Stumped by Gary Pettigrew
Little Big Crimes: Stumped, by Gary Pettigrew: "Stumped," by Gary Pettigrew, in Mystery Weekly Magazine, September 2019. A charming historical mystery this week. Let's...
Sunday, September 15, 2019
A Short Walk Down A Dark Street: Issue 70
As posted by SMFS
member Peter DiChellis to our list…
This week’s blog treks bad-ass back
roads with links to a fearsome clan of reviews, releases, free reads, and more.
Includes:
A review of a Daniel Woodrell collection and two rural noir free-reads
from Tough.
Plus:
Make your characters more interesting with lies.
A
short walk down a dark street (#70). Celebrating short
mystery and crime fiction.
Best
wishes,
Peter
Saturday, September 14, 2019
SMFS Member Publishing News: Joe Walker
SMFS list
member Joe Walker’s short story, “Gnat” appears in the new anthology, Life
Is Short And Then You Die: Mystery Writers of America Presents First Encounters
with Murder. Published by Macmillan, the read is
available in both print and digital formats from Amazon
and other vendors.
Synopsis:
Life Is Short and Then You Die is
the Mystery Writers of America's first teen anthology, edited by #1 New
York Times bestselling author Kelley Armstrong.
Adolescence
is a time of “firsts.” First kiss. First love. First loss. First job. The first
taste of adult responsibilities, and the first look at an independent life away
from both the restrictions and the security of home.
And
in this case, a very different type of “first”: murder.
This
short story collection of murder mysteries adds a sinister spin to the joy and
pain of firsts that have always been a major part of life, whether it be high
school cliques who take the term “backstabbing” too seriously, stumbling upon a
body on the way home from school, or receiving a Snapchat message that promises
something deadly.
Contributors
include Barry Lyga, Caleb Roehrig, Emmy Laybourne, Jonathan Maberry, R.L.
Stine, Rachel Vincent, Y.S. Lee, and more!
SMFS Member Publishing News: Frank Zafiro
SMFS list member, Frank Zafiro, writing as Frank Saverio,
has a short story in the new anthology, The Wand That Rocks The Cradle: Magical
Stories Of Family. Published by Lagrange Books, the read is available in
both print and digital formats at Amazon.
Mr. Zafiro’s short story is titled, “To
Find A Peach.”
Synopsis:
Warm, heartbreaking,
tender, poignant—eight fantasy stories of the family.Family is filled with
magic. It can be the warm magic of love, with bonds that can never be broken;
it can be the bitter magic of old resentments and keen disappointments. It can
be achingly beautiful or terrifyingly cruel.Explore the hidden depths of family
in this anthology of stories from celebrated and award-winning authors.
Transport yourself to dazzling settings like an isolated lake cottage watched
over by a mysterious protector, a reality-TV show about a family of witches, a
world besieged by dragon-wielding terrorists, an oddly relaxing coffee shop,
and New Orleans after the rise of the unquiet dead.Experience the wonder and
magic of family.The Wand that Rocks the Cradle features the following
stories:“Bellwethers Know Best,” by Marion Deeds“Legacy,” by Joanna Michal
Hoyt“Coffee Break,” by W.O. Hemsath“She That Was So Proud and Wild,” by Misha
Burnett“Dead in First Grade,” by P.L. Sundeson“The Dragon Detector,” by Elana
Gomel“The Lake Cottage, by Michelle F Goddard“To Find a Peach,” by Frank
SaverioWith an introduction by editor Oren Litwin.
SMFS Short Story Saturdays: Richie Narvaez
Each Saturday, we feature a SMFS list member whose work can
be read online for free. These short stories are at least a year old.
For
SMFS Short Story Saturdays today, list member Richie Narvaez shares his May
2018 published short story, “Withhold the Dawn” archived at CrimeReads.
If you would like
to be included and are a member of the SMFS list at yahoo groups, email the
link to your story to KevinRTipple at Verizon dot net. If you are not a member,
this would be a good time to check us out at Yahoo
Groups.
Friday, September 13, 2019
Writers Who Kill: Writers and Mistakes by Warren Bull
Writers Who Kill: Writers and Mistakes by Warren Bull: Writers and Mistakes by Warren Bull Image by Daniela Holzer on Upsplash To be human is to err. Authors are people too. Y...
Wednesday, September 11, 2019
Tuesday, September 10, 2019
SMFS Member Publishing News: Edith Maxwell
Today is publication day for SMFS list member Edith
Maxwell’s new book, Judge Thee Not: A Quaker Midwife Mystery. Fifth in the series,
the book is published by Beyond The
Page Publishing. It is available at Amazon
and other vendors in print and digital formats.
Synopsis:
Quaker midwife
Rose Carroll must fight bias and blind assumptions to clear the name of a
friend when a murderer strikes in nineteenth-century Massachusetts . . .
No stranger to judgmental attitudes in her small town of Amesbury, Quaker midwife Rose Carroll is nonetheless stunned when society matron Mayme Settle publicly snubs her good friend Bertie for her nontraditional lifestyle. When Mrs. Settle is later found murdered—and a supposed witness insists Bertie was spotted near the scene of the crime—the police have no choice but to set their sights on the slighted woman as their main suspect.
Rose is certain her friend is innocent of the heinous deed, and when Rose isn’t busy tending to her duties as midwife, she enlists the help of a blind pregnant client—who’s endured her own share of prejudice—to help her sift through the clues. As the two uncover a slew of suspects tied to financial intrigues, illicit love, and an age-old grudge over perceived wrongs, Rose knows she’ll have to bring all her formidable intelligence to bear on solving the crime. Because circumstantial evidence can loom large in small minds, and she fears her friend will soon become the victim of a grave injustice…
No stranger to judgmental attitudes in her small town of Amesbury, Quaker midwife Rose Carroll is nonetheless stunned when society matron Mayme Settle publicly snubs her good friend Bertie for her nontraditional lifestyle. When Mrs. Settle is later found murdered—and a supposed witness insists Bertie was spotted near the scene of the crime—the police have no choice but to set their sights on the slighted woman as their main suspect.
Rose is certain her friend is innocent of the heinous deed, and when Rose isn’t busy tending to her duties as midwife, she enlists the help of a blind pregnant client—who’s endured her own share of prejudice—to help her sift through the clues. As the two uncover a slew of suspects tied to financial intrigues, illicit love, and an age-old grudge over perceived wrongs, Rose knows she’ll have to bring all her formidable intelligence to bear on solving the crime. Because circumstantial evidence can loom large in small minds, and she fears her friend will soon become the victim of a grave injustice…
Monday, September 9, 2019
Little Big Crimes Review: The Dead Man in the Pearl Gray Hat by Bruce W. Mos...
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SMFS Member Publication News: Larry Chavis
SMFS Vice President Larry Chavis’ poem, “The Hunt,” is published online today at The 5-2. Inspired by a form of Welsh poetry, the piece is Mr. Chavis’ first poetry publication at the long running site operated by SMFS list member and former officer, Gerald So.
Guest Post: How to Make A Story: What to Put In, What to Take Out by Elizabeth Zelvin
Please welcome back
Elizabeth Zelvin to our SMFS Blog. Among other things, Elizabeth Zelvin is the
editor for the Me Too Short Stories: An Anthology recently
published by Level Best Books.
How to Make A Story: What to Put In, What
to Take Out
Elizabeth Zelvin
The topic of my new anthology, Me
Too Short Stories, is crimes against women, tales of retribution and
healing. I had two agendas. One was to give a voice to women and girls who had
survived abuse and violence. The second was to do it through fiction—specifically,
through short stories. I had a story of my own already written, a perfect fit
for what I had in mind.
When I started reading submissions, I found that
some of them were too linear. A woman was victimized, she had her feelings, she
reacted. Such a narrative was heartfelt, but it wasn't a story. I was looking
for stories in which something happened.
I wanted plot, craft, and context, not fictionalized
versions of personal testimony, heartfelt and powerful as such testimony can
be.
Full disclosure: as I realized the above
distinction between the manuscripts I was accepting and those I was rejecting,
I realized that I'd only written half a story. Back to the keyboard! I left the
opening pages as I'd written them, introducing my protagonist. Then I added a
second protagonist and started to develop her very different story. By the time
I was done revising, while the two main characters never meet, their destinies
are on a collision course.
I still had something to learn with that
particular story. I asked a respected writer of short stories for a critique.
"This
scene is too long," he said. "You don't want to give the reader time
to guess what happens. Besides, the scene is close to the end, so you need to
pick up the pace.”
“How do I fix it?” Some critters make you solve it
yourself, but it couldn’t hurt to ask.
This is
the paragraph you can do without," he said.
He was absolutely right. As an editor, I help
others with pace all the time. But sometimes I still need someone else to point
it out in my own story.
It wasn’t the first time. I was in a workshop
group that was giving critique of one of my novels. Chapter One started with
the telephone ringing. The protagonist answers, rolls out of bed, throws his clothes
on, runs down the stairs, and dashes out into the rain, where two friends are
waiting in their car.
Once again, it was a short story writer, another
master of the brief, who put a finger a third of the way down the page and
said, "The story starts here."
Out came everything from the ringing of the phone
to the opening of the car door. The first two words of the published novel are,
"I scootched." Thanks to that writer’s finger, the book starts with a
surprising verb instead of a series of boring actions that the reader doesn’t
need to know.
Elizabeth Zelvin ©2019
Elizabeth
Zelvin is the author of the Bruce Kohler Mysteries and the Mendoza Family
Saga. Her short stories have been nominated three times each for the Derringer
and Agatha awards and have appeared in Ellery
Queen's Mystery Magazine and Alfred
Hitchcock's Mystery Magazine, among others. She has edited two anthologies:
Me
Too Short Stories: An Anthology and Where Crime Never Sleeps: Murder
New York Style 4. Visit her author website at http://elizabethzelvin.com.
Sunday, September 8, 2019
A Short Walk Down A Dark Street: Issue 69
As
posted by SMFS list member Peter DiChellis…
This week’s
blog serves up the hot stuff with links to a smokin’ assortment of reviews,
releases, free reads, and more.
Includes: All the latest free-to-read flash
fiction from Mystery Tribune, and reviews of two issues of cutting
edge crime ‘zine Switchblade.
Plus: Interviews with the editors of Tough and The
Strand Magazine (for those who missed them on the SMFS blog).
A short walk down a dark street (#69). Celebrating short mystery and crime fiction.
Best wishes,
Peter
SMFS Members Published in the Me Too Short Stories: An Anthology
Numerous SMFS list members are
published in the just released, Me Too Short Stories: An Anthology.
Published by Level
Best Books, the read was edited by SMFS list
member Elizabeth Zelvin. The book is available in print and digital formats
from Amazon,
and other vendors.
The SMFS list members in the anthology are:
Ana Brazil with “Miss Evelyn Nesbit Presents.”
Diana Catt with “The Final Recall.”
Dayle A. Dermatis with “Women Who Love
Dogs.”
Eve Fisher with “Pentecost.”
Lyn Hesse with “Jewel’s Hell.”
VS Kemanis with “No Outlet.”
Madeline McEwen with “Stepping on
Snakes.”
Ann Rawson with “A Dog’s Life.”
Carol Sojka with “Chrissie.”
Elizabeth Zelvin with “Never Again.”
Synospis:
What do women want? A voice. To be heard.
Respect. To be believed. Justice. To be both safe and free. The women in these
stories have daughters, sisters, friends. The minister worries about her
parishioners. The banshee worries about the Hippocratic Oath. The
microbiologist worries about her obligation to the dead. They will use any
means to protect themselves and those they love: a childish jingle, a skillet
full of cornbread, a candle, their own quick wits. We cannot ignore their
voices.
Saturday, September 7, 2019
SMFS Short Story Saturdays: Jim Doherty
Each Saturday, we feature a SMFS list member whose work can
be read online for free. These short stories are at least a year old.
For
SMFS Short Story Saturdays today, list member Jim Doherty, writing as Scott
Morrison, shares the May 2003 published short story, “Red-Handed” that
originally appeared on Hand Held Crime.
Thanks to the Wayback
Machine Internet Archive you can read it.
If you would like
to be included and are a member of the SMFS list at yahoo groups, email the
link to your story to KevinRTipple at Verizon dot net. If you are not a member,
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Friday, September 6, 2019
Writers Who Kill: Idioms and Their Meanings with Sources Noted Too b...
Writers Who Kill: Idioms and Their Meanings with Sources Noted Too b...: Idioms and Their Meanings with Sources Noted Too by Warren Bull Image by Monkgogi Samson on Upsplash From: ...
Jacqueline Seewald: Tips on Overcoming Writer’s Block
Jacqueline Seewald: Tips on Overcoming Writer’s Block: As a writer, there are times when my creativity dries up like a parched desert. Writer’s block is something most authors experience at on...
Wednesday, September 4, 2019
SMFS Member Publishing News: Jack Bates
SMFS list member Jack Bates’ short story, “Bonne Chance
Confidential” appears in the new anthology, Grimm, Grit, and
Gasoline: Dieselpunk and Decopunk Fairy Tales. Published by World Weaver Press, the read is available in both print
and digital formats from Amazon,
the
publisher, and other vendors.
Synospis:
Dieselpunk and decopunk
are alternative history re-imaginings of (roughly) the WWI and WWII eras: tales
with the grit of roaring bombers and rumbling tanks, of 'We Can Do It' and old
time gangsters, or with the glamour of flappers and Hollywood starlets, smoky
jazz and speakeasies. The stories in this volume add fairy tales to the mix,
transporting classic tales to this rich historical setting.
Two young women defy the devil with the power of friendship. The pilot of a talking plane discovers a woman who transforms into a swan every night and is pulled into a much more personal conflict than the war he’s already fighting. A pair of twins with special powers find themselves in Eva Braun’s custody and wrapped up in a nefarious plan. A team of female special agents must destroy a secret weapon–the spindle–before it can be deployed. Retellings of The Little Mermaid, Hansel and Gretel, Rapunzel, Cinderella, The Monkey King, Swan Lake, Pinocchio and more are all showcased alongside some original fairy tale-like stories.
Featuring stories by Zannier Alejandra, Alicia K. Anderson, Jack Bates, Patrick Bollivar, Sara Cleto, Amanda C. Davis, Jennifer R. Donohue, Juliet Harper, Blake Jessop, A.A. Medina, Lizz Donnelly, Nellie Neves, Wendy Nikel, Brian Trent, Alena Van Arendonk, Laura VanArendonk Baugh, Sarah Van Goethem, and Robert E. Vardeman.
Two young women defy the devil with the power of friendship. The pilot of a talking plane discovers a woman who transforms into a swan every night and is pulled into a much more personal conflict than the war he’s already fighting. A pair of twins with special powers find themselves in Eva Braun’s custody and wrapped up in a nefarious plan. A team of female special agents must destroy a secret weapon–the spindle–before it can be deployed. Retellings of The Little Mermaid, Hansel and Gretel, Rapunzel, Cinderella, The Monkey King, Swan Lake, Pinocchio and more are all showcased alongside some original fairy tale-like stories.
Featuring stories by Zannier Alejandra, Alicia K. Anderson, Jack Bates, Patrick Bollivar, Sara Cleto, Amanda C. Davis, Jennifer R. Donohue, Juliet Harper, Blake Jessop, A.A. Medina, Lizz Donnelly, Nellie Neves, Wendy Nikel, Brian Trent, Alena Van Arendonk, Laura VanArendonk Baugh, Sarah Van Goethem, and Robert E. Vardeman.
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